Throw it out there and see if it sticks.

 Keep in mind, my manuscript is still a work in progress and in need of revisions. 
Some of the subject matter in Chapter 2 is suggestive, and there is some foul language (No F* bombs) used throughout.  Expect there may be overused words and choppy sentences.  The writing portion is done so the story hopefully makes sense and leaves you  with questions to be answered in the next part. 
Any feedback will be greatly appreciated.  I cannot get better if I don't know what the problems are.